哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

" g8 A# g) t3 a# V  e请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
- S+ F9 G" \; Z% s3 PDear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
The children practsed every day after school.
Then,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
Jo was one of the pirated.
& ?8 ~! @9 E9 c* UThen on his left.
9 K( b$ u. \) h7 H9 MJack was very good in the band.
We all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
* {' A' `* N) M" k: ^$ l% ^After the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
' x7 D# {& j2 }) WWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
! A) `; \# G3 z3 x, h. m1 s1 n6 vDo you habe shows in your school in New York?
% |- g" U; c; ~+ b9 L: E' M$ \6 yTell me about them.

Love, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
6 O, A" A: Z9 O& Z1 B& \8 [- gThe children practiced every day after school.
Then, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
Jo was one of the pirated(?).
& G- ^/ x* y7 E1 q# A7 Z: x& M& i3 EThen on his left.(?)
Jack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
( Y- ^8 u8 a+ d) r2 LAt the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
2 O+ E' d5 j3 LDo you have shows at your school in New York?
Tell me about them.
& E7 s0 r4 a. r7 r" s4 V
Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?

Dear Jay,
2 ?; c. Q8 g% Z/ AThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
4 @; G% ^5 H& R' eAll the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
' s# n. `0 A  `6 {The children practised every day after school.
: U4 s6 k$ w# ]0 vThen, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
Jo was one of the pirates.
2 Z+ r  s" o# c% w. g% S; X/ F" m0 [) zThen on his left. (<-- ???)
2 ~. H; B* E, J% @1 B4 jJack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows in your school in New York?
; H0 l. a* p" M& N* uTell me about them.
, W5 |1 \7 g( Z; j
; ^3 l# H8 q" ALove, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
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kiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

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2 m, M% h; g! u( i. v4 Q    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?
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Dear Jay,
4 S2 u7 j' e: h* V7 Z/ j0 r, u; KThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the  ...
大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

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    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
8 s: e" U& J2 _' h9 ~" pitsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

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    Spring Show
5 t" _7 P1 c- ]- s2 m6 D  d    Danke!