哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
Dear Jay,
* t9 |" Z+ H+ }  C' \# ^: ^; z3 kThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
  `0 }& A5 o! T2 i/ x( I: @4 UAll the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
The children practsed every day after school.
Then,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
# d& u/ N3 I) G7 d! |& fJo was one of the pirated.
Then on his left.
Jack was very good in the band.
0 w7 R0 f4 A) C" [0 VWe all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
After the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
$ \5 y) E& v2 h3 ]We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you habe shows in your school in New York?
5 o: A: i0 |' r$ N) b' @3 oTell me about them.
. I, s, q2 K2 ^3 o
Love, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
6 H! j) n5 \  E% EThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
. T: p/ k: T+ |! i5 M' OI was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
6 ?& ~1 B4 S" iThe children practiced every day after school.
1 N& O% B4 z$ UThen, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
3 F! V( |6 |/ x0 _( BJo was one of the pirated(?).
! }& ]. j) a# b8 B3 ?: X+ KThen on his left.(?)
) |$ Z, U9 v1 O; G3 @Jack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
1 G' x# S0 @: sAt the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows at your school in New York?
9 I% n- B% c4 w  C* t5 T6 N. MTell me about them.

Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?
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Dear Jay,
, B, J( n# T( e  dThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
. _) {9 Q5 v: Y, {8 _1 u; GAll the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
3 i0 B9 }9 U) p+ ^9 R9 j( F) @: XThe children practised every day after school.
: D3 i7 N7 h# Z$ l3 NThen, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
3 H  _- g4 Z3 R/ M/ yJo was one of the pirates.
+ m- U. I( [2 f9 C6 I" V" PThen on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
4 B. Q; k9 f3 N, NWe all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows in your school in New York?
* r7 m; |7 V$ B- C7 q. P2 O: b5 cTell me about them.
& o/ _- D& Q- S+ s/ S+ ]; y
* s2 j8 L/ T. e1 A; _Love, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
...
kiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

7 v' ~0 D& x+ H4 p) _    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?
7 p0 {/ C% V& S; A$ O" N; T
Dear Jay,
, K/ a3 {- M0 {* j7 i7 g' tThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
2 @( O6 x7 @$ |" j! JAll the  ...
大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

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    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
1 I7 X8 Z! z% B4 pitsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

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    Spring Show
    Danke!